Baby Ava Composition

[Sandra Shan]

Not sure if in the right place for this question, l need to know if this composition is okay as it is my first one, l know her feet are covered but they were

covered like that in the original photo, l am wanting to present to client asap so need to know it's okay to do that...thankyou...

[Damien Symonds]

No, the colour of the blanket is wildly varied, immediately below the child.

[Sandra Shan]

Okay will fix and repost....thankyou

[Sandra Shan]

Have lightened the darker patches of blanket is this okay now also toned down the baby....first pic lightened blanket.....second pic before

[Damien Symonds]

Yeah, that's just ok.

[Sandra Shan]

Right so l shouldn't show client then l am at a bit of a loss with this one been working on it for hours....might have to give composite's a miss l think....

 

[Damien Symonds]

May I see the separate photos which you combined?

[Sandra Shan]

The pram l brought so not mine......

[Damien Symonds]

Ok, I understand more now.

If you just sharpen up the masking (use a smaller brush) around the rug behind the baby's butt, I think it'll be fine.

[Sandra Shan]

Hi Damien, l started all over again as wasn't happy with it at all.....so l am hoping that this is much better. Also is the baby's colour okay..? I also lightened the background a ittle...

First pic is the previous one l did,  second pic is the redone one.....Am l able to show client yet or still room for improvement

[Damien Symonds]

Oh, I really like the cleaner edges of the blanket!!!!!!

[Sandra Shan]

Thankyou...!!!   So does everything else look okay l am wanting to show client.  Is there anything else l need to fix....??

[Damien Symonds]

I think it's gentle and "pastely" and lovely.

[Sandra Shan]

So l can say WOOO  HOOO then and show my client.......?  l have worked for hours on this....thankyou...

[Damien Symonds]

I'm sure your client will ADORE it.

[Sandra Shan]

Thankyou....thankyou.....thankyou....!!