Mary Burgy

I didn't see you brought the hair in on the right.  Is the chin side good?  Will work on hair now.

Did I do too much? She's looking better!

I thought I did more.... but I guess I didn't on that same side.

I didn't do that mesh thing so I have to see if I can get back in....

Okay and  would you attempt the double chin under her neck or slimming the other side of the face?  I don't have many with the boys looking this good but I still feel this doesn't flatter her.  She looks better in other photos but I need to make this work.....

Am I overthinking it?  I would try and do a swap but her head is so close and I don't really have a match with no flash.

The raw was approved for similar photo no flash.

I need to attempt to make the mom look better... just seems to be an odd angle and not sure how to help it...

I would love to see how you did it.  I prefer the last one.  

Yes... that is what I meant!  Hers still has those rich warm cheery colors but the matted look... I don't know how to explain.

That has potential... maybe not as dark but I like the tone change.... Hers still has a lighter feel to it but this is def a good start.

Is there a way to "cheer" it up a bit maybe? 

I am looking to make these car photos feel more vintage.... I love the work of this photographer.

Is that posted okay?  I posted a link and it put her picture like that.  If I need to change it let me know.