Wonderful! Much nicer already.
There's more I wish I could discuss with you about the raw processing aspect of this photo, but I can't do so here, sorry. I urge you to get on the Raw Class waiting list as soon as you can (if you haven't already).
So for now, I'll have to make do as best we can.
Before we get to the colouring issue, I need you to brighten the hands and the face, so that they're more of a match for her chest/shoulders area. (A match in brightness, don't worry about the colour for now.
Then post again for me.